Economic progress for raising the living standard is always a debatable topic because a stream of people think that it would be bad for society as social moral values will deplete. But in my opinion, economic development for a nation is a far better choice than thinking about values. The following passages will give arguments to prove my viewpoints.
Firstly, nobody can deny the fact that when a country’s economic progress is escalating, that will bring many salutary impacts on all the segments of society. The primary benefit would be numerous employment opportunities and with the help of these one citizen can resolve various distress situation he was facing in his life. Which means people can devote more time for the betterment of society instead of fighting and adopting illegal ways to get financial gain.
In addition to the above, financial progress can be done with the help of foreign direct investment. International companies will bring technology and boost the country’s economy by the inflow of capital. In a developing nation like India, for example, coca-cola wants to invest 5 lakh billion dollars by 2020 as it is an emerging market with potential consumers. Moreover, this investment will bring fortune and more jobs for the unemployed youth. So, it will be a boon for society.
In conclusion, I reckon that economic development is not bad for any society or nation and could not be the reason of degradation of societal norms whereas it is one’s cultural root system which inculcates the basic morals and ethics into the people, not the ways through which one nation is doing progress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, whereas, for example, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10820895522 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78047674009 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.457356962 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136812908663 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470291740162 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614924818212 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874723544126 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661641239102 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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