Local shops are closing down because of competition with big shops and supermarkets.
Does it have more advantages or more disadvantages to shoppers?
Give reasons for your opinion and relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Owing to globalization, there is a cut-throat competition in market.Although it is observed that many small retails are shuted down because of cut-throat competition with big shopping malls, which has positive and negative effects. I believe that this change is more beneficial for customers because it saves time and also provide an opportunity to earn more money because of offers.
To begin with, most people are busy to earn money to enjoy their materialistic lifestyle. So they do not have enough time to go for shopping at various outlets in market. In other words, they are fond of preferring supermarkets where they get all belongings under one roof. Ultimately, it saves time of today's time poor people. For example, these days customers get all required products in big shopping malls like Reliance mall, Alpha mall and many more which is beneficial for both customers and shopkeepers.
Admittedly, it is fact that every entrepreneur want to stay ahead in market by attracting customers by launching copious lucrative offers during festivals and routine days as well. In other words, this is beneficial for not only businessman but also consumers. Moreover, people are able to purchase things at more economic price compared to that of retailer shop. For instance, if customers purchase goods from big shopping malls or brand franchise, they will get flat 20% discount on all households which is ultimately beneficial for people and businessman as it increases customer base.
In conclusion, while more small retails are closing due to high competition in market with big brands and markets, I think this trend is more beneficial to shoppers due to its time savvy and make it possible to get goods at economic rate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Although
...e is a cut-throat competition in market.Although it is observed that many small retails ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al for both customers and shopkeepers. Admittedly, it is fact that every entrep...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: ECONOMIC_ECONOMICAL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economical' (=affordable, cheap)?
Suggestion: economical
...ple are able to purchase things at more economic price compared to that of retailer shop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1524822695 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85065141155 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570921985816 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7213443222 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22771453001 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795253762981 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599750828542 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149599944026 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036454003367 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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