Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries but its disadvantages cannot be overlooked. What are some of the problems of tourism?
tourism plays a crucial role to boom up the economy of a country and the touristy is the best source of income for those who are facing the problem of unemployment.there are many disadvantages of tourism which is not to negleted.here,i shed some lights on my point of view.
over this new millennium, touring is enhance day by day from the western nation.when they arrive for tour to such a particular country and he or she can not able to speak the particular language which make the communication gap between touristic or a tour guide.Many youngsters get impress to see western people personality and they started to follow western culture and day-to-day forgetting their own.
We cannot over look the advantages of tourism.there are huge advantages mass is running their business with the extraordinary flow.many people spend their households expenditure in smooth flow to do this job.they also get the extraordinary knowledge and develop their own interaction skill with foreign people and knowing the culture of their country.
Hammering the last nails of this topic.reflecting the advantages more than disadvantages .it is true that plethora of people living there life unconditionally and make their dream to do this job and get golden opportunity to meet their goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21256038647 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20450481069 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618357487923 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2949445059 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 269.75 106.682146367 253% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.75 20.7667163134 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147807003911 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966984827521 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921979685813 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966984827521 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921979685813 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.0 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.