Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
From my understanding of the situation modern technology is affecting the people’s ability and has become a prime issue. Extension of modern communication we are getting isolated from the society. For some people technology is making people sociable and for others they disagree. Today I will discuss about both sides of the argument and give my opinion.
To begin with telecommunication has evolved from many years . Most people depend on social network sites like facebook, twitter, instagram etc. to communicate with others. The technology development which helps sharing photos , videos , video calls has made people easy to communicate from one place without travelling. This brings people from all the corners together.
The modern use of mobile phones are also creating simple way of communicating with one another through calls, texts and are able to see each other through video calls. This way of communicating takes fraction of seconds to get connected. E-mails are other way of communication for business purpose.
But,however olden days people were less sociable.They prefer face to face communication which is more intact. They believe face to face communication helps people solve the issues more transparent and help them build up the relation with great contentment. For far away communication they use letters in written format.
Moreover,the usage of mobile phones are misleading the society mentally and physically which is leading to the state of the addiction.Outdoor games for children has been exceptional now a days as they are more interested on mobile games. Many children are facing abnormal issues due to mobile addiction.
Finally , people have been hedonistic for the modern technology which is essential for the current life style of a common man.It has both pros and corns we need to be more precise in using it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, second, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3904109589 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98387895216 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592465753425 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.6146150114 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4444444444 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227903319306 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666393216817 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699579925714 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110166946542 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872322051033 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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