The two maps illustrate the arrangement of University's Sports Center in two different situations, present and future. Overall, there will be lot of changes regarded to the expansion of the building and installment of new facilities.
Presently, the University Sports Center comprises of main building and two Outdoor Courts that are located in the western side and eastern side of the building. The Main Building has facilities such as 25m Pool that is surrounded by Gym, Changing Room, Seating, and Reception.
According to the future plan, the western and eastern Outdoor Courts will be demolished in order to expand the area of the core building. As a result, new facilities will be developed, such as Leisure Pool, Changing Room, and Sports Shop on the western side, and also Sports Hall, Changing Room, Cafe, and two Dance Studios in the eastern side. However, the facilities in the main building remain the same, despite of the enlargement of Gym and Reception areas.
- The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words. 61
- The charts below show the average percentages in the typical meals of three type of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 70
- Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up? 61
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whee relevant. 67
- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...Presently, the University Sports Center comprises of main building and two Outdoor Courts th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71235598696 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9348827255 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.714285714 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0993635274812 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049318344238 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0168135799662 0.0843802449381 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074276309173 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00604267767717 0.0819641961636 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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