The university experience is more important than a university’s degree. Some people argue that university life is much more important than an educational degree in the job market. Do you agree or not agree?
It is an undeniable fact that University engagement is more important than University degree. However, it is always debatable that which method of gaining experience is more effective. Few analysts believe that life experience at the university is more salient in the long-term, while others argue that education degree certificate is best suitable for the job market. This essay will discuss why and how the University experience matters most for the future benefits of students before deducing a plausible conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriads of reasons why learning in the University is unreserved salient. First and foremost, a student can experience practical and social networking skills, which means students can learn how to communicate with a variety of people and draw a conclusion with a comprehensive understanding of their discussion. Therefore, it can be said that education in college results in tremendous benefits for the students.
In addition to the networking skills, the other important benefit of being on the campus during education is that students can learn other activities such as sports. The participation of sports in the college makes students to develop their leadership skills which is one of the key personalities for developing skill in the companies. As a result, this helps students to manage people effectively in corporate companies.
To conclude, I am inclined to the view presented in the essay above that students are more benefited in the college than just receiving an educational certificate from outside for the job market. And this view may be varied from person to person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...argue that education degree certificate is best suitable for the job market. This essay...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3488372093 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00543345469 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538759689922 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8276570795 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275317291864 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108560256772 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133395918272 0.071462118173 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163338527759 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149832333614 0.0609392437508 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 12.6369458128 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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