These pie charts depict the proportions of nutrients that are comprised in USA people's typical meals. Overall, it is readily apparent that most Sodium and Saturated Fat are usually consumed in Dinner, while Added Sugar is usually contained in Snacks.
Sodium and Saturated Fat have similar proportions, where they are mostly contained in Dinner (43% for Sodium, and 37% for Saturated fat, respectively), and followed by Lunch (29% for Sodium, and 26% for Saturated fat, respectively). The rest of Sodium are found in Breakfast and Snacks with tied proportions, 14%, while Saturated Fat is then found in Snacks with 21% proportion and Breakfast with 16% proportion.
The last is Added Sugar, where it is often comprised in Snacks, with 42% proportion. It then followed by Dinner, with the proportion of more than a half of Snacks, 23%. After Dinner, Added Sugar is found in Lunch with 19% proportion. The least Added Sugar is contained in Breakfast, which has slightly different proportion from Lunch,16%.
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- the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 56
- Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up? 56
- The charts below show the average percentages in the typical meals of three type of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 70
Dear e-rater, please review
Dear e-rater, please review and give a score to my essay because i think there is an error in the e-grader system. I have tried submitted the essay several times and still get band 1.0. Thank you. God bless you
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 10
No. of Words: 164 200
No. of Characters: 801 1000
No. of Different Words: 77 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.579 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.884 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.66 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 55 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 38 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.093 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.375 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.464 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.661 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.171 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17791411043 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7562472025 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521472392638 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7101448964 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0275846971812 0.215688989381 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0167172125337 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0209118408549 0.0843802449381 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0231498012007 0.15604864568 15% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113487535042 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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