Nowadays the majority of people faced with this vital issue that the aim of movies are just should be for amusement . This particular highly controversial topic is strongly oppose by people . but personally I strongly consider that films play a critical role in people’s knowledge for various reasons.
firstly , it is not laborious to clarify that the most significant idea of a movie is to make the viewers to feel the surge of emotions towards their surroundings ,which is the critical factor in shaping anyones behavior , for instinct however simple it may seems whenever someone burst into tears after a movie or touch euphoria or even filled with horror it leads to a better coping mechanism in real life .in another word these emotions helps them to not be afraid of experiencing new challenges and not to be utterly disappointed.
secondly , it is absolutely undeniable that the rate of people that choose movies over books has gone up drastically over the past decades which is totally overwhelming . so the needs of making these movies an educational one became one of the most optimistic goals that in gist leads to an assertive point in everyones life .
last but not the least , undoubtedly children’s are the greatness of our future society so despite of all persistence of parents to force theme to read it simply more logical to teach them by movies which they prefer. it has been known by mounting evidence that the negetive points of forcing your child is the outcome of their egotistical behavior afterall.
in conclusion, numerous perspectives has been discussed over this issue . for the following reasons i think that the needs for educational usefulness movies seems more logical .after all statistics has shown that the rate of film users outcome none users so we are ought to tech them something by their lifestyles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, after all, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01628664495 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80636080214 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596091205212 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.095120906 49.4020404114 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.0 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0814723193938 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037459250017 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283432080558 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458950782943 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388323951508 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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