You are leaving a job and coming back to your hometown. Write a letter to your friend and say
– What is the reason for your leaving?
– What do you plan to do?
– Where and when will you meet your friend to discuss it?
Dear Hussey,
hope this letter finds you in pink of your health.
I am writing this letter to share an important news with you. I have decided to move onto greener parsers to some other country. I have resigned from my current organization and I am coming back to my hometown next week.
The reason why I resigned from my job is that I am willing to travel abroad and wish to relocate there.
I am planning to peruse a masters degree from an English speaking country. Once done will apply for jobs there only, with the experience in hand, I strongly believe it would be easy.
As I will be free for sometime I was planning to start again with my coaching classes and will try to sit for the exams later this year, as there isn't much time left. With a job in hand, it was getting difficult to deal with.
I wish to meet you and had a lot of things in mind that I need to discuss with you. Let's meet near the old fort cafe around 5:30 evening time. Please feel free to suggest any better time as per your convenience.
hope you will understand and support me further with my decision.
Can't wait to see you.
Your's Sincerely,
Robert Woss
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'important news'.
Suggestion: important news
...h. I am writing this letter to share an important news with you. I have decided to move onto ...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... greener parsers to some other country. I have resigned from my current organizat...
^
Line 10, column 147, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...for the exams later this year, as there isnt much time left. With a job in hand, it ...
^^^^
Line 12, column 85, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...n mind that I need to discuss with you. Lets meet near the old fort cafe around 5:30...
^^^^
Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
...etter time as per your convenience. hope you will understand and support me furt...
^^^^
Line 16, column 1, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...support me further with my decision. Cant wait to see you. Yours Sincerely, R...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38425925926 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20979841144 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615740740741 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1879496203 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.1333333333 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 4.34317383033 9% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254032198836 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852460035893 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599552182729 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113461560899 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606268630622 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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