While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
• explain what happened
• apologize for the accident
• tell your friend how you plan to make it up to him
Dear Rahul,
How was your vacation? When did you come back? I had enjoyed a lot staying at your luxurious flat in your absence, but unfortunately, I broke a glass bowl accidentally, which was placed on the top right of the dining table. There was no personal intention to drop it on the floor, but it was an accident and happened when I was trying to clean it, as there was some dust on it. Consequently, I tried to fix it using glue, but it didn't work.
I am really sorry about the whole incident, which took place in your absence. Because I broke an expensive bowl, which was really important to you, I am already feeling depressed and regretting my decision to clean it.
However, I would like to ensure that I will buy a brand new similar bowl as soon as possible. If you would like to buy it yourself then I would be more than happy to pay you for it. Being a good friend, we can meet and discuss this matter in more detail at your place.
I am looking forward to meeting you next week. Moreover, we will discuss your vacation experience and will explore trip photos together.
Your best friend,
Sunil Kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 430, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...y, I tried to fix it using glue, but it didnt work. I am really sorry about the wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43269230769 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4374573278 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.82511133 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9230769231 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351735979738 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113682334287 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635019372241 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174339879389 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542370101341 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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