You have recently moved to a different location. Write a letter to an english-speaking friend. In your letter
-explain why you have moved
-describe the new house
-invite your friend to come and visit
Dear John,
How are you doing? I hope this letter finds you fit. I am writing this letter to tell you that I have moved to Toronto, a cosmopolitan city in Canada, last week. The reason behind this movement is a new job offer, which I received from Canada's most popular company, Sunlife Financial. Nevertheless, I always wanted to settle down in this country; and it was my dream to get a job there. My dreams come true.
I am really excited to tell you about my new house which I rented for the next two years. It has four bedrooms in total and one drawing room connected with an open modular kitchen. In addition, it has a huge garden, which is full of green plants, in front of the main door. Also, there is a garage beside the garden area. Overall, I would say that it is just like a mansion.
Next month, however, it's my birthday on nineteenth November and I want to celebrate it with you. So, I would like to invite you to my place on this occasion. We will explore this beautiful city together as I am also new to this amazing city.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Best wishes,
Matt Henry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 22, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ke a mansion. Next month, however, its my birthday on nineteenth November and ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, nevertheless, really, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39719626168 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3335870327 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635514018692 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0442602384 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.8125 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.375 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172989175199 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546090378802 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643941858239 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955520184377 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507491843806 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.