You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter
Describe the situation
Explain why you cannot continue at this time
Say what action you would like to take
Dear Mr. Adris,
This letter seeks your approval for my resignation for the Science course. There a various reasons but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that I cannot arrange my time to continue. In fact I have a full-time job and unfortunately I fail to finish the work to go to class on time. Since I’m working for a real estate firm as a project manager and my project is going to launch the new product next month, it is requirement of overtime working daily.
However I still need to graduate from this course, so I would like to continue in the near future. I suggest that I’ll save current achievement and resume after finish my project. Hopefully this attends your arrangement.
Should there are any procedure that you need me to do before I quite, kindly let me know.
I highly appreciate your approval. Thank you in advance.
Best Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'reason'?
Suggestion: reason
...for the Science course. There a various reasons but the most conspicuous one stems from...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...uirement of overtime working daily. However I still need to graduate from this cour...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...opefully this attends your arrangement. Should there are any procedure that you ...
^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ank you in advance. Best Regards,
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7987012987 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61601287454 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694805194805 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1692867202 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224255055177 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748765487801 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592428141486 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120502235146 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231442345329 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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