Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance.
What problems does this shortage cause?
What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?
In recent years, problems related to water quality has become one of the most serious global issues. This essay will analyze the culprits behind these situations and recommend several solutions to tackle them.
The shortage of pure water in some regions in the world is believed to be the consequence of numerous factors. Firstly, although water is provided abundantly in major cities, there are still remote places where the local residents do not have access to freshwater resources. For example, in the countryside of Vietnam, the inhabitants are in grave danger of conducting severe diseases owing to poor water hygiene and hundreds of people are killed every year. Secondly, the water-processing procedure in some companies is not supervised carefully by the government. As a result, the water is still contaminated and may do harm to human health.
Being aware of the existing elements leading to the shortage of freshwater supply, a myriad of measures which are proposed to solve the problem. First and foremost, the government should pay more attention to remote regions and provide the local residents sufficient fresh water periodically. Moreover, water products manufactures should be supervised thoroughly by governmental staff to ensure the standard water quality of their products.
In conclusion, although some problems related to poor water quality are caused by various factors and become more and more serious in contemporary society, plenty of solutions are believed to tackle these situations effectively. In addition, each country is advisable to carry out a flexible plan in order to adapt to certain areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4431372549 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88885753983 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58431372549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7951351947 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210644195334 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715485725515 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530545267472 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127456482848 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343331364551 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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