Water shortage is nowadays gaining a significant place in the worldwide forum as a problem of great importance. In fact, according to the researches, fresh water is a limited resource in some parts of the world. This essay will illustrate the main problems caused by this issue and will also elicit certain steps that can help the national authorities and individuals in controlling this growing water scarcity.
In order to find effective solutions to the problem, it is necessary to understand what has brought about this shortage. First of all, lacking of fresh water ends up with an elimination of the global surge in potable water requirement. The overpopulation of the metropolitan areas has caused the phenomenon of urbanization followed by this vast surge in fresh water. As a result, the water that is available for daily use is not sufficient and furthermore, may be contaminated leading to illnesses and deaths, for example, in populations of Africa. Secondly, water scarcity is becoming a major problem for agriculture and industry. When there is insufficient water, crops fail, animals die and human go hungry. Without an adequate water supply, manufacturers, food producers, mining operation and businesses cannot succeed. Ultimately, water is the key to economic prosperity.
A number of urgent measures need to be taken in order to solve the problem. National authorities, firstly, can control this water shortage by reducing global warming and climate change. Strict national legislations for preventing natural fresh water reserve pollution are also required. Similarly, public can also contribute towards this noble cause by conserving water and also by limiting their daily household water usage. They should refrain themselves from performing such as watering lawns in the summer, or pouring our grey water down the drain.
To sum up, the scarcity of fresh water is a growing global problem, there are various means and methods available, by which both the government and individuals can prevent this from worsening.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, for example, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38317757009 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93012473496 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598130841121 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.539652035 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.647058824 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342941433375 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106036031276 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540190060634 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206608999738 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348408348025 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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