The number of hours people sleep has become less in recent times. This essay will examine causes and effects of this development.
First of all, there are countless reasons of sleeping fewer hours than before. One of the primary reason is that coffee is consumed more than ever before. For example, a survey by Youth Portal Turkey in 2018 revealed that 80% of correspondents drink coffee to stay awake till late night. There are, also, more electronical appliances such as televisions, computers and smart phones which are addictive devices. For instance, a study by University of Ankara in 2017 reported that 80% of teenagers would like to play online games rather than sleeping.
Secondly, there are innumerable effects of sleeping fewer hours on people and society. To begin with, the number of people who suffer from depression has risen exponencially. It is considered that when people sleep eight hours a day, they feel relaxed and happy. Unless the number of hours they sleep is risen, not only mental but also psychological health problems will be suffered. Further and more importantly, academic achievement will become less gradually. Students have to concentrate on courses to be successful consequently they should sleep enough to recharge their batteries and energy to work harder. For example, a study by Government of Turkey in 2018 revealed that 90% of students who have less than seven hours sleep daily couldnot pass university entrance exam.
By way of conclusion, in todays' world people donot sleep as much as they used to do in earlier times. High consumption of certain substances and enjoyable devices are primasry reasons of this development but it has a plethora of detrimental effects therefore people should give high importance on quality and quantity of sleeping pattern.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer hours'?
Suggestion: fewer hours
...ere are innumerable effects of sleeping less hours on people and society. To begin with, t...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ere are innumerable effects of sleeping less hours on people and society. To begin w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19243986254 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72908924491 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580756013746 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5040377382 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326764527317 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113780470529 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995284579487 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193582359072 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712072334083 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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