Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
The prevalence of celebrities is gaining ground in this era of globalization. Being a celebrity itself is a huge privilege in terms of status, financial prosperity and personal achievements; nevertheless, its darker side can not be underestimated. Here, I would like to account for pros and cons of living life as a celebrity with my perception.
There are numerous advantages of being reputed at national or international level. First and foremost, prestigious reputation glorifies internal soul and bring huge pleasure as a role modal. Therefore, Having name and fame with ruling over hearts of ...
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tnxxxx sir Although villages
tnxxxx sir
Although villages have some positive things for children development but cities have far more greater opportunities to grow well than villages.
is the usage of although and but is perfect ... ???? if not than suggest me ???
It is wrong to put although
It is wrong to put although and but together in one sentence. Either although or but is enough.
Although villages have some positive things for children development, cities have far more great opportunities to grow well than villages.
or:
Villages have some positive things for children development, but cities have far more great opportunities to grow well than villages.
It is 'far more great' not
It is 'far more great' not 'far more greater'
prestigious reputation glorifies internal soul and bring huge pleasure as a role modal.
prestigious reputation glorifies internal soul and brings huge pleasure as a role modal.
life of a reputed star not only bring roses of joy
life of a reputed star not only brings roses of joy
Sentence: To illustrate, earning money profusely enables them to fulfill every desire like having rashing homes, luxury cars and top class electronic apparatus and so on.
Error: rashing Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: From my notion, ''every coin has two aspects''. life of a reputed star not only bring? roses of joy, prosperity and comforts but also thorns of stress, distance from near and dear along with fear of criticizm, media and terrorist bombards.
Error: criticizm Suggestion: criticism
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