Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered?
It is irrefutable that obesity is a burgeoning problem these days. Juvenile's health has increasingly deteriorating by fatness which were seen in grown persons in earlier time. There are some reasons along with few possible solutions which I will discuss in upcoming paragraph.
To begin with, the causes of corpulence among youngsters. First and the foremost,reason of obesity is unhealthy diet. Nowadays, homemade food,which is fulfil with fibers and nutrients, is avoided by children and they are more attracted towards fast food. Moreover, in this contemporary world, parents are busy ins their work and they do not have much idle time to guide their offsprings for healthy diet. For instance, parents order food online because of their busy schedule,which leads to the obesity in their children. Furthermore, another reason is that youngsters these days have sedentary lifestyle and they are less active than they used to be. Although, in the past, juveniles took part in sports and activities that mitigated their body fat as well as burned calories but today they spend most of the time in indoor games, sitting in front of computers and playing games.
On the other hand, there are some solutions to cope up with this problems. The first is that parents should aware their children about the negative impact of junk food. Besides this, parents should also educate youngsters about nutrition and they should cook healthy delicious meals at home. Adding to it, regular workout is also one of the best way to solve this issue. To clarify it, teachers and parents should encourage the pupils and juveniles to do some physical activities and take part in sports.
In conclusion,the diseases occurs in children which were merely saw in adults. Nevertheless, there are some remedies for decline this sort of problems by putting more efforts in it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14900662252 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.670289093 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602649006623 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7533725015 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4705882353 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41176470588 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127325369563 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433725706079 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364151833171 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819545440607 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410692238437 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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