Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. what is your opinion about this? discuss with appropriate example.
The importance of large shopping malls are replacing small shops which has always been datable , has now upsurged a lots of arguments in favor and against it, thus it has become even more controversial, the substantial influence large shopping malls are replacing smalls shops has sparked the controversy over the potential of this trends in an integral part of the society in the recent years. It can be agreed that upside of large shopping malls are replacing small shops instruments indeed, however it has some various drawback as well . This easy will be elaborate both assertion and will provide to a well weighted conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why large shopping malls are replacing small shops is unreservedly salient , but the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that large shopping malls are replacing small shops for instance . Therefore, it is clearly vital time for people appreciate the significance of for the overall amelioration of society.
However, there are some people, who choose to think differently and hold an opposing viewpoint, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of large shopping malls are replacing small shops , nevertheless, the contradiction is rooted in the fact that large shopping malls are replacing small shops example hence, it is apparent that downside of cannot be overlooked .
The above presented dissertation illustrates both perspectives about the impact of large shopping malls are replacing small shopes . while it is evident that it has various benefits, although its deleterious effects cannot be ignored and have to be addressed and well balanced against its merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35632183908 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86035148255 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524904214559 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.175466606 50.4703680194 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.75 104.977214359 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.625 20.9669160288 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 7.25397266985 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.33497536946 356% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354748762615 0.242375264174 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171103271776 0.0925447433944 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125819393928 0.071462118173 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238120363816 0.151781067708 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541219611542 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 12.6369458128 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.