Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
Food industry has made a rapid growth in the past decade. Due to processed food cooking has become a hassle free task. Too much efforts are not required in kitchen nowadays as frozen chopped vegetables are available in market. Further to make it even more comfortable and quick, canned beans are there to help you. In the following paragraphs I will shed some light on my view points on the above statement.
Firstly, it is very common these days that both partners are working which is why it is difficult for a person to give their full time in kitchen. Therefore, this revolution of food industry has definitely helped working couples to manage their kitchen. Next, in this modern technology era where every thing is automated the use of ovens, microwaves and hot-pot equipments have bring a drastic change in lifestyle. Their use has changed the cooking style and made cooking more comfortable.
Furthermore, bringing frozen vegetables and canned beans from supermarket saves your time and money. The time you are spending in kitchen can be utilized in some personal family time or in your own relaxing time. Lastly, considering all its benefits few of the inevitable drawbacks are also there, those needs to be discussed. Packed food is not as much healthier as fresh vegetables but in this busy life if you are getting a chance of having the meal prepared at home without putting much efforts, then I would say preference is definitely with home made food. Because it is a cheaper and reasonably easier option to have.
All things considered I must say food industry and technology both in combine has made our life easier in kitchen. As fas as health is not being compromised it is always better to make use of them and save your efforts. So that in this hectic life you have some time for yourself and for your loved ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...king has become a hassle free task. Too much efforts are not required in kitchen now...
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Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...ped vegetables are available in market. Further to make it even more comfortable and qu...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rstly, it is very common these days that both partners are working which is why i...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...is difficult for a person to give their full time in kitchen. Therefore, this revolution ...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to work' or 'work'.
Suggestion: to work; work
... of food industry has definitely helped working couples to manage their kitchen. Next, ...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
... microwaves and hot-pot equipments have bring a drastic change in lifestyle. Their us...
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Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...d. Packed food is not as much healthier as fresh vegetables but in this busy life ...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e meal prepared at home without putting much efforts, then I would say preference is...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r and reasonably easier option to have. All things considered I must say food in...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78616352201 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53148365143 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588050314465 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0321182185 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5294117647 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17647058824 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206156863252 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603205916181 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386102650573 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121652577575 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421808633105 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.