The given diagram illustrates the seven stage process in the production of bricks for building construction. Overall, it is obvious, how the proportion of bricks is manufactured and delivered to the building industry.
Admittedly, at the first stage, the use of digger guide to pick up clay from the ground and throw out in the metal grid. Subsequently, at the second level, there is the process of filtering to eradicated impurities clay from the roller and transformed into the purity of sand. Thereafter, at the third step, the utilization of water and sand produces bricks through the wire cutter and then, it moulds all the bricks into the systematic manner simultaneously.
Furthermore, at the fourth and fifth phases, the quantity of bricks is stored in the drying oven about 24-48 hours and then transferred into the two kilns up to (870 -13000) degree Celsius at strikingly and (200 -980) degree Celsius at moderate respectively. After that, this proportion of bricks are shifted into the cooling chamber up to 48-72 hours. Finally, the process of packing all the bricks continues and delivered by vehicle for the building industry concomitantly.
- The chart below shows the average hours worked per day by married men and women in paid employment Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- Many people are using credit cards or loans to run up huge personal debts that they may be unable to repay. It should therefore be made more difficult for individuals to borrow large amounts of money.What are your opinions on this? 78
- The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The graph below gives information from Annual Energy Outlook 2008 about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 89
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, second, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18085106383 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91859913562 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579787234043 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8817351342 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179954082417 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096550569672 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875769000875 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153891838167 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114862207484 0.0819641961636 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.