The line graph represents the data on the changes in the number of individual CO2 emissions in metric tonnes during 4 decades (1967-2007) in 4 European countries.
Overall, there was an upward trend in 2 countries including Italy and Portugal whereas the United Kingdom and Sweden witnessed a downward one.
In 1967, the two countries that occupied the 2 lowest number were Italy and Portugal, which respectively recorded about 1 and 4 tonnes of the CO2 emissions per person. It is clear that the figure experienced a significant increase over the first 30 years, it rose by approximately 3 tonnes in both these countries in 1997. After 1997, unchanging trend was recorded in both Italy and Portugal, they reached a nadir at roughly 7 and 5.5 tonnes in 2007, respectively.
Regarding the downward trend of CO2 emissions, the United Kingdom and Sweden experienced a moderate decline during 4 decades. In 1967, they recorded the 2 highest figure for CO2 emissions, at about 11 and 9 tonnes, respectively. The figure for the United Kingdom was decreased during 40 years, by 2 tonnes from 1967 to 2007. Meanwhile, although Sweden had a remarkable increase between 1967 and 1977, the figure was still recorded a downward trend after 1977, at more than 5 tonnes in 2007.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, so, still, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97641509434 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85038001876 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1504117238 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.222222222 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180681642746 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841345383679 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435720220375 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116850492095 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129202810625 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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