In spite of the advance made in agriculture, many people in the world still go hungry.
What is this the case? What can be done about this problem ?
Although there was an increasing of advanced technology in agriculture, many regions around the world still face to the problem of food lacking. There are several reason why this situation happened, however this problem can be solved by various ways. In this essays, both ideas will be examined.
On the one hand, people is some country which don’t have enough food to consume, despite there was an advanced made in agriculture, is caused by many reasons. Firstly, the birth rate is getting higher since many poor families gave birth to their child when they were not ready. Therefore, they could not handle high cost of food for family. Furthermore, as there was an advanced in technology of agriculture, food might becomes more expensive because it seems to produced by high standard of machine which have to use high budgets. As a consequent, poor people could not support this costs. For instance, in Thailand, ,many restaurants in city centre use special equipment for cooking, customers from rural area never familiar with the unreasonable price per dish which is too high for them.
On the other hand, there are some solutions that can help to deal with this problem. To begin with, government are suggested to distribute some food in the poor area of each country. Creating a charity project, to illustrate, in order for rich people to share money or food consumption. Another example which can help a lot is people rather to limit the amount of cooking in each house in order to not make the food become waste. If every house cook by the limited, it can give a chance for others to receive.
In conclusion, even though there are many causes why many people around the world don’t have enough food for consumption in spite of innovative made in agriculture, I believe that numerous solution should also be considered. If everyone including government who have a greater chance help poor people, our word can be developed and I expect that there will be an equality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91988130564 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58391042499 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551928783383 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2616240061 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254407712838 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875846182563 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701594414841 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175954126991 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088294156582 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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