We Celebrate Independence Day But Are We Truly Free?
August 15th 1947, the day all the Indians believed we got Independence. I am sure each one us proud to be a citizen of India with great contentment. India is the largest democracy in the world followed with 6 fundamental rights (i.e., Right to freedom, Right to Education and culture, Right against Exploitation, Right to equality, Right to freedom of religion, Right to constitutional remedies)
Well, are we really independent from all the above mentioned 6 fundamental rights? India has got its independence from British but, do we have freedom from the whole lot of evils and problems that stronghold in India. There are many factors other than these 6 fundamental rights where India needs Independence.
Firstly, India will be independent when we are free from corruption. Whatever sector we go right from clerk to higher officials everyone is corrupted. People openly demand to pay money in order to get the work done without a second thought about the opposite person situation. People say Right to Education but, now that education system is also totally corrupted where parents are forced to spend money. For corrupted human the word Corruption has become pursuit of pleasure.
The next evil which is most important is female molestation, female harassment, crime this exactly says that India is never independent. Being, in 21st century still a girl has been threaten in different aspects. No doubt women are doing wonders in all the respectful fields with reliability and being optimistic. But, still the society is back of them pointing their nose towards them and the so-called government of India is nowhere taking a step to stop the crime which takes place every day in every corner of India irrespective of the age of a girl.
People say right to religion, but now days no religion is for respect in the name of religion people kill each other and increase the crime rate. Religion is just for granted in the name of god.
People say British has taken away our freedom but, in today’s world an Indian is back of other Indian to grab their freedom to be hedonistic. Until and unless we eradicate all these social evils, completely get rid of them I personally cannot term India as independent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, so, still, well, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98123324397 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71941859841 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55764075067 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.531158578 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.222222222 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149685870296 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525283671606 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797639361059 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779903270002 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541989979948 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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