The topographic depiction below illustrates the two potential sites for a novel supermarket intended for the town of Garlsdon, whose population density is 65,000. The proposed site S1 is located in the northwest of Garlsdon and the site S2 is towards the south of Garlsdon.
The first possible site S1 is located in the outskirts of Garlsdon. About 12km afar from S1 is Hindon whose population density is 10,000. A rail route passes through Garlsdon from the northwest to the south east. There is also a main road which originates from the industrial area crosses through the country side towards Hindon. The site being located in the outer region provide huge area for parking.
The potential site S2 is located at the heart of the town which is a restricted parking zone . A rail line goes through the Town centre. The site S2 is surrounded by industries all around. Towards the north and south of S2 are two housing areas respectively. A main road originates from the industrial area on the south west of the town and passes through the outskirts towards Bransdon which is 16 km away and has a population of 15,000. Another main road begins from the south east and goes through the countryside all the way to Cransdon, 25 km away with a population of 29,000.
In conclusion the proposed site S1 being located in the outskirts is easily accessible to the population of Hindon and the people in the housing area situated in the north only. Meanwhile S2 is more accessible to the people in the housing area in the south, Bransdon and Cransdon. The public transport system can be easily accessed to both the proposed sites.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 965.302439024 139% => OK
No of words: 282.0 196.424390244 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76241134752 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62530615195 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425531914894 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6537201631 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9375 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3125 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192072576506 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719247310586 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871857068172 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133615996627 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117190457104 0.0819641961636 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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