Music remains a vital aspect of an individual's life and is considered a divine gift by many. Irrespective of age, sex, caste and creed, individual's listen to music whatever type it may be.Recent decades have shown burgeoning of various types of music due to which some people claim that the existence of traditional music is in danger. I personally believe that although international music is widely listened to, it is crucial to listen to and keep up with a country's traditional music.
Firstly music of any language or nation soothes one's stressed mind and relaxes their mood thereby bringing about a sense of upliftment. Music serves as an inspiration, a remedy, a relaxation technique and also a source to kill boredom. Some claim that listening to music enlightens them to an extent that they attain absolute bliss. Apparently music of any language and culture, finds its way to the heart of the people. Furthermore, technological advances in the recent decades has made international music much more accessible allowing it to reach the heights of fame.
Suffice to say, being aware of ones traditional music aids in contemplating their culture, values and long held traditions which, these days have become quiet foggy, thus, inculcating a sense of patriotism. This also provide a deeper understanding of their origin and thus promotes a sense of satisfaction and achievement. Listening to traditional music also helps an individual understand the music they are listening to, since its their own language
In conclusion, listening to music, whether international or traditional, is vital in today's stress filled environment. Even though listening to international music helps learn a language and is easily accessible and widely heard nowadays, its high time one started to look deeper into their roots by concentrating a little more on the traditional music.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, so, thus, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2519379845 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04984602884 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.285204702 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402843378212 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162671895574 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930867471938 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24899249669 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101905735195 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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