There's a famous saying "Theres no place like home" which brings about a genuine feeling that cannot be replaced. Some people claim that they migrate to other countries searching for greener pastures.This change can bring about various benefits while pessimists think otherwise.
To begin with, a recent study conducted suggests that the proportion of people migrating from developing countries to industrialized countries have significantly grown, to approximately three fold. Apparently, burgeoning of industries provide better employment opportunities and improved lifestyle in developed nations.
Now a days, a lot of people are seen crossing borders to pursue their continuing education enabling them meet individuals from various culture and background, thereby developing their social skills. Furthermore, this phenomenon enables an individual to learn new languages, thus improving interpersonal relationships. Recent decades show a great percentage fleeing war torn countries to escape difficult circumstances and build a better life.
Despite the arguments above, this process can bring about huge changes in an individuals life. they face wide range of difficulties; for instance, learning a new language can become a hassle for older people, and imbibing on a new culture can turn into an emotional toil. In addition, the country itself suffers stagnation in economic growth when all efficient and capable people leave for betterment of their lives.
In summary, migration has turned out to be a phenomenon which is unstoppable but controllable; if the governments of the developing countries provide better options and facilities for its people. But, the governments fail to improvise the facilities, and since the benefits of migration outweigh its hazards, people would continue leaving a country searching for better opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91143911439 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15927503978 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660516605166 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7083090237 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0896255891206 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034681301786 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409581096536 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519379844356 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275454306487 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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