Dear Mark
I would like to bring to your notice that dog Bruno has been behaving unusual last night.
While I was in a deep sleep in night, I was shaken up by a sudden barking sound woke me up at 3:00 am, to my surprise Bruno was running in a strange fashion in your garden, as I saw from my window for couple of minutes, it turned out to be never ending. Analysing the situation it seemed there was a kind of uneasiness in his actions.
As I wake up at 6:00 am and have to leave for office, it has been difficult for me to get a good night sleeping and concentrate on my work. Due to financial year closing, my schedule is busy and I arrive late to home. So, a good sleep is a must for me.
On my way to morning walk I met with a veterinarian, he suggested to visit him in the clinic. His contact details are with me and can be shared if you require.
Thanks
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a strange fashion" with adverb for "strange"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...00 am, to my surprise Bruno was running in a strange fashion in your garden, as I saw from my window...
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Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested visiting'.
Suggestion: suggested visiting
...ning walk I met with a veterinarian, he suggested to visit him in the clinic. His contact details ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.04 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31728201097 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651428571429 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.8381854752 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.375 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18214662438 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636614295869 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054934955877 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108513297807 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328303576994 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.15 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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