Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Other say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which view point do you agree with?
It is generally understandable that advertisement has become integral part of modern society’s life. The huge number of benefits which we already enjoyed seems like the clear proof of how important the advertisement is. While the proven one can be accepted, the opponents argue that it can persuade people to purchase unimportant goods. However, considering some crucial aspects, I particularly think that advertisement carries many more positive impacts rather than the negative aspects.
Today, there have been so many pros and cons developing in society regarding the impact of the advertisin...
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Sentence: Because the advertiser hire a beautiful model to be their icon, it automatically persuades many women to buy that product, knowing all women always want to be looked beautiful.
Description: The fragment advertiser hire a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace hire with verb, past tense
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