You recently ordered something online and had issues in online delivery. When the order came it was not complete.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter –
– explain what you ordered and what were the things missing.
– explain the importance of this delivery.
– ask for a replacement.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the items I received yesterday. I would like you to exchange these items on early basis.
I placed an order of a pair of wool socks and gloves through online service at your website. I am disappointed to see that the parcel I received did not include the gloves. It came to me as an utter disappointment.
I would like to inform you that I need these items till coming Monday because I will take them with me on my up coming trip to Northern areas.
I hope that you will deliver me these essential things as per order placed at the website. I would be thankful to you if you could exchange this order with my demand submitted at the site.
I look forward to seeing your prompt reply in the matter.
Yours faithfully,
Syed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...through online service at your website. I am disappointed to see that the parcel ...
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Line 8, column 92, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ngs as per order placed at the website. I would be thankful to you if you could e...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...th my demand submitted at the site. I look forward to seeing your prompt repl...
^
Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ply in the matter. Yours faithfully, Syed.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 664.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48648648649 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59378506515 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 127.690721649 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614864864865 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2256109329 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168710658234 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641305985866 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565510453453 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804041148043 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636823408598 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.