Using cellphones and computers made communication among people much easier. As a result, letter-writing could be lost in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? What is your opinion?
Some people are of the opinion that with the age of modernization comes the shifting of preference when communicating using mobile phones and computers leaving the traditional way of letter writing in the past. I am of the belief that this is what is happening today and strongly accept the notion.
Making emails or sending messages to intended recipients has been made easily accessible and readily available. This is because one may just pay for an internet connection or pay for a post-paid load to gain the possibility of connecting to different people. Apart from this, e-mails and phone applications have been further developed which makes it easier for most senders to reach those who are from afar such as reaching a love one from abroad or someone who is not readily available right away. This saves time and energy on the part of the sender.
Another is the continuous innovation with online transactions as added features regarding security have been imprinted on mobile phones and emails when sending messages that contain confidential data. For instance, one can provide a password or encryption when creating private messages. As a result, senders and receivers are able to have a peace of mind knowing that the contents of the messages they send and receive online have not been hacked. There will also be no chance for any tampering or alteration as the one who made the transaction is the sender.
In conclusion, although sending letters may be traditional and sincere in some ways, I am of the opinion that we should embrace the innovations brought about by technological advancements. This does not only provide ease and comfort when connecting to other people, but can also provide security to everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('post-paid') instead an adjective, or a noun ('load') instead of another adjective.
...y for an internet connection or pay for a post-paid load to gain the possibility of connecting t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0487804878 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76866488158 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588850174216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0628428858 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107394378401 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389112301935 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531362524322 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792860605754 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754038469978 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.