Many people believe that the elderly had better live with their family rather than other options, namely going to nursing home. However, it is not completely beneficial, there are some drawbacks which is unavoidable when having older people living together.
On the one hand, the elderly people are usually considered experienced ones in solving the problems. These people would accumulate much knowledge from what they had overcome throughout their long lifetime. Therefore, living with older people encourage younger generations to obtain more lessons in order to develop their essential social skills such as communication. People can also gain worthy wisdom from their stories about events happen in the past. Moreover, living with older people can be considered an effective way to express appreciation to them. People can easily do grateful things, namely look after and spending time with them every day.
On the other hand, people may also have some problems living with the elderly. They usually have a great deal of health problems and mental illnesses but these diseases can seldom be cured. In addition, older people would never completely recover from them once they suffer at such old age and that necessitate a special care and attention from family members. People, however, are possibly unable to expend enough things to fulfill the demand since they must concern about other matters in their life. My grandmother, for example, has had an Alzheimer for five years. She hardly remembers the house’s address so my family always carefully watch her which is sometimes difficult.
To conclude, living with the elderly may be not comfortable to some aspects, however, it is still advantageous for people who are offspring to learn new things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...er, it is still advantageous for people who are offspring to learn new things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.325 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52687342099 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3904955903 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312666117004 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977943852217 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687834515777 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194472066694 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673545608434 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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