The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
There has been a lot of pressure on health care system to sort the health related issues due to increase in number of overweight people. So according to some people physical education classes should be started in the school syllabus to minimize this problem. In my opinion, I agree that physical education lessons should be introduced in the school curriculum.
A good reason to initiate physical education in school is to make students physically fit from young age. This will help in developing confidence among the children. They will feel more active and positive in their life. As a result, young generation will learn the significance of healthy lifestyle for future as well.
Another reason for introducing physical education classes is that it will create awareness in the society. Students will discuss the teachings of the class with elder people at home and in the neighborhood. This will in turn will also make parents cautious about their health and eating habits and they will also convey the positive aspects of healthy lifestyle to other people.
Finally, by teaching physical education in school will result in reduced stress on the healthcare department. This will benefit the society as a whole because the funds that were earlier allocated to health care system could be better utilized for other sectors like infrastructure. This will lead to development of the nation as a whole.
In conclusion, introduction of physical education in the school course is must for any country which wants its people to lead a healthy lifestyle and development of other sectors as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14176245211 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71459115754 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532567049808 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8509610708 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8571428571 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221095863688 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804876306665 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569088854614 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128811766738 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829624572346 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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