You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
- Give details of your study plans
- Explain why you want to get a part-time job
- Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear John,
I am glad to tell you that I have accepted in one of the most famous colleges in London. I am also thinking to do job there to get experience, and your help is needed in this matter.
The postgraduation course in which I got admission is comprises of twelve months period. Furthermore, there will be extra three months to complete the final project so it will take almost fifteen months to complete the degree of masters.
I came to know that my classes will held three days per week as well as their timing is also scheduled in the evening. So I plan to do a part-time job there to achieve local work experience. Also, it would aid me to bear my living expenses over there.
Since you have lived in London fo many years; therefore, your exposure regarding job scenario could support me to find a suitable employment. In addition, can you please guide how to build my résumé to meet the requirements over there.
I would be so grateful to have your response in the matter. I look forward to seeing your reply at the earliest.
Your friend,
Syed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 55, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...tion course in which I got admission is comprises of twelve months period. Furthermore, ther...
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Line 6, column 37, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
... I came to know that my classes will held three days per week as well as their ti...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54639175258 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55418482767 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623711340206 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9235298934 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240724176854 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865174501328 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603947695463 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110058948661 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549923878784 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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