Some say that young and energetic employees are the most valuable for the company, others argue that older employees have more experience and knowledge.
People believe that older workers who have more than 10 years experience can deal with problems than those who are still young and lack of experience . In my opinion, I think that young people can also do things very well.
Some people say that older worker can work better than others because they have a lot of knowledge from years to years.However, they can not focus on their work or stay no longer in the company. Moreover, they easily get the physical diseases.Finally, they can work around the clock so the process of the work is delayed and it brings their products to be a bad one,
On the other side, other people argue that young ones can also make a good performance.People value creative-thinking is better than technical and soft skills. In addition, they can also do things well and they are good at working at workplace. Furthermore, they can find their feet in every situation and they have more motivation to keep working.What's more, they like studying to use that things in real life.
In conclusion, both of young and older workers have their own advantages and drawbacks. I suggest that the companies should take the young ones as a worker.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75369458128 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79555776441 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576354679803 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0223184636 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.625 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.75 7.06120827912 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160113265735 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786628654425 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501585526198 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107217372133 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210185033299 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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