Science advanced so much that it can now make it possible for people to live 100 yrs or even 200 yrs. Some people think it’s a good thing , while others think its bad . Discuss both the views and give your opinion .
From my perspective, science is eternal and with the upgrading technology in today’s world man is creating wonders.Yes, with the development there are pros and cons when it comes to human life span and here we will discuss the effects of longevity as human in future.
It is commonly believed that any living species lifespan has an end and when it comes to mankind we have a longer life when compared to plants and animals (apart from few species).Science has given an opportunity for us to utilise it in every aspect and develop new things to make of living more easier .
In addition to above, scientific researchers discovered many medicines most of the diseases which result increase in life span of the people and the population.Man has now come up with artificial intelligence using modern technology and to develop the extension of human lifespan.Today’s world advanced science has everything to do with where human heart is being transplanted from one to other, every part of the body can be operated which is helping the human to extend the lifetime more than the required .
Having said that anything which develops good has also bad in it and in extension of human life we have seen the scenarios where people develop business form the human body parts they do experiments on both human and animals where it leads to cost of one’s life.Anything, more than the required leads to harm when it is not utilised in the right way the same goes with advanced science where extension of human life is a positive sign but that should not be a curse the nature rule and other living species on earth.
To summarise, science is a part in all living species and human has alone got a chance to utilise it and develop it for the upcoming nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72638436482 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54239983531 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504885993485 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2545772681 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.1 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122497369417 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528783451835 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271101662302 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721744137653 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167792119597 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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