Does technology helps people? To what extend do you agree?
Modern technology is making life of people easy compared to past. Home appliances are consuming more now a day’s which assist to save time and energy of household. I take it in a good way, however, excessive of it also can be a curse.
To start with, electronic items are made to make our work efficient. A single invention can change our way of life drastically. Either it is Television, Telephone, Washing Machine, Pressure Cooker and so on. For an example, for a joint family, Washing machine can be boon which assist to clear all the clothes of large number of people which saves both time and energy. And the another best example is telephone, communication was tough but after the invention of it, now family members far from the home can easily gets update by a single call.
On the other hand, there are not only good points of technology. Along with good feature, there is always a drawback of it. Television can be a good example of it. We watch tv to obtain new updates along with to entertainment. But the excessive use of it can make your dull and spend your time with doing any productive work. For example, a kid enjoys watching cartoon in tv are addictive towards it which ultimately affects the reading habit of toddlers along with the eye affect. Many kids today are bound to use glass in the small age.
To conclude, if you are using technology properly then it reduces your work load and time but if you are using it irresponsibly then it also backfires you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...responsibly then it also backfires you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, as to, for example, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62030075188 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56734990694 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1421614404 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8125 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0792118881167 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225758641013 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046983365554 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0625451221255 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537581130247 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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