At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In today’s modern and technological world, youth’s are the asset of the country. A country with the youths is contributing to national GDP where elder people are now the burden of the country. My essay will give some good reason that country with youth’s is advantage instead of a disadvantage.
Young people’s are the benefit of the country in this revolutionary time period. There is a shortage of working force in every country leaving after few of it. For an example, Japan is the one which is in terrible condition. It’s older age percentage if more then 50 % of total countries population and also its population growth rate is in negative according to recent national population survey. After a few decades, Japan’s economic growth rate will slow down due to the lack of manpower and youths.
On the other hand, countries like India, Bangladesh, Indonesia are the country who has a large chunk of young adults. These countries adults are adding a brick to the development of countries economy and it’s for sure that they will do it for a few more decades compared to Japan. Either it’s about manufacture or agriculture, National security force or construction labor, youth is the need of the country.
The country can achieve the set goal with the proper use of adult manpower in the countries development. Counties like India, Bangladesh, and Indonesia are meeting the target of 10 % in the development index of the country compared to others. And the major factor is the birth rate ration which is still around 3 percentage which is a very good indication for the country.
In this way, young adults are the germ of the country and their contribution can make a huge difference in the development and economy of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... It's older age percentage if more then 50 % of total countries population and ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...e percentage if more then 50 % of total countries population and also its population grow...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Indonesia) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...tries like India, Bangladesh, Indonesia are the country who has a large chunk of yo...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...the proper use of adult manpower in the countries development. Counties like India, Bangl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06081081081 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9154257357 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523648648649 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9860183524 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182328996887 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648654923813 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055567653033 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10225444103 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213962523883 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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