xumputer games and films containing violence are popular today. Some people think that these are harmful for our societt and the government shold ban them. Others argue that such games are fine for entertainment . Duscuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, by increasing violence in the mass media and also the computer games, there are two different discussions for and against of this controversial issue. In this essay, I am going to explain both sides the topic and give my own point of view.
Distribution of violence in computer games and movies can be harmful for each society. it has deterioration effects on people, especially children and teenagers.
By playing these games, they gradually become far from social communications, and they are going to be alone.it also will be dangerous when they try to be one of the game’s character. Furthermore, it is going to be common in their own view and they are encouraged to behave similarly in the real life. In addition, by showing violence movies, two happenings will take place. one of them goes back to celebrities that they are an idol for individuals. By playing rough roles, people love to do the same by imitating them. The other is illustrating creative ways to do a crime. Given the circumstances, all these, are converted to an instruments to increase the crime rate in the community.
On the other hand, critics claim that not only is it necessary for individuals to discharge their energy in this way, but also they can experience full of exciting moments. These are just for entertainment and cannot be offensive for society.
Consequently, by all these differing interpretations, it must have continual effort to prevent distribution of violence and it is extremely obvious that the government can play a remarkable role during the path. It seems to me using physical activities and doing more sports can replace these severities and also be crucial to enhance. Therefore, if it does not do any effective activity the society will become vulnerable, and also it is also surrounded by crime and criminal gradually.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, similarly, so, therefore, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01628664495 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02374886867 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57654723127 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5440174338 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176706155665 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598643400372 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528715091594 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106352354485 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374258440536 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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