In some countries , many more people are choosing to live alone nowdays than in the past . do ypu think is a positive or negative development?
In few nations, large number of individuals are selecting to lead qn isolated life in today's world than in former years . In my opinion , living alone is a negative development as people may face psychological problems, it is quite expensive to live alone away from families and unable to take right decision.
People who want to live separate and lead an independent living may face numerous problems . First of all, the increasing trend of living alone create psychological problems such as, hypertension, depression, loneliness, isolation. As human beings are social animals, if they are lacking such social circle it can definitely have detrimental effect on their health. Therefore, requirement of such companies is necessary to whom they can share joys and sorrows. For instance, in developed countries mostly people prefer to live alone and majority of them suffers from depression. Thus, these problems can reflect the growth and success of individuals.
The next possible effect is that living alone can be highly expensive. In other words, individuals hirr an expensive apartments where they have to live separate as they do not share their flat with anyone, so they bear huge expense and pay their electricity bills, telephone bills etctera alone without sharing a part with anyone. Futhermore, people are not in position to take right decision of their life because there is no one to guide them. As a result, they indulge in bad habits.
In conclusion, I believe that living alone can create more psychological issues and it is quite difficult for people to pay huge expense and unable to take right decision well on time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14981273408 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77713819797 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.535164739 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.769230769 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208625648187 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723759680931 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674377147749 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132040715488 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311931750077 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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