Animals being held in zoos is often debatable. Some people consider that zoo's are useful for conserving endangered wild animals whereas others will opine that, the act is cruel. In this essay I will discuss both the views before drawing an opinion.
On one hand, There are few advantages with zoological gardens. Firstly, We can provide shelter to the endangered species and animals. Most of the animals are loosing shelter and their natural habitat due to deforestation. For instance, Recently an elephants herd lost their house and entered in a village. Secondly, visitors moreover children can explore all birds, animals and reptiles at one place called zoological park. If zoo's are not installed the animals, for children it is hard to gain the knowledge about animals other than books. Thirdly, The animals housed in zoo are closely monitored and recorded by the organisers, also they are protected from the hunters and its predators. Finally, the organisers will have data about endangered animals which are going to extinct soon, so that they can figure out the ways to protect it.
On the other hand, though there are few advantages with zoo's, we must not forget about the disadvantages. Capturing animals and arresting them in zoo is against to their natural habitat. When they were in forest, the animals are free from walls and they were not constrained to one location, they can roam freely where ever they want. Some people behave cruelly towards animals when they were in cage and provoke them. Few visitors feed the prohibited food to animals which may cause serious illness. Although the zoo organizers provides food to the animals, but it will not sufficient. In few scenarios, the confined animals couldn't adjust to the surroundings leads to death. For instance, White tigers couldn't cope up with surroundings easily.
In conclusion, In my perception, zoo's might provide shelter and useful for endangered animals but we must not hold the liberty of animals. capturing and arresting animals is an inhumane act. Animals have right to live on earth in their own terms as like humans, so we must not curb their freedom.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0593220339 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54832479699 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54802259887 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7619828161 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4090909091 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195505778387 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650338180399 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724769343991 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151551661968 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970862548388 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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