More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time.
What problems does this cause?
What do you think are some possible solution?
It is argued that the trend of buying vehicles for the first time among progressing nations is increasing at a staggering rate. The main problem this cause is global warming and the most viable solution is a public awareness campaign about the possible dangers of bringing more cars on roads.
The principal problem associated with the purchase of the car is the increase in temperature of the earth. This is to say that fossil fuels of car combustion produce greenhouse gases such as carbon dioxide, methane, and nitrogen dioxide, these gases mix with the air and form blanket over the earth' atmosphere, because of this entrapment of the sun rays occur. This results in an increase in the overall temperature of the earth which causes glaciers to melt and rise in sea levels, which leads to flooding in coastal areas. For example, a recent government survey on pollution found that the total contribution of cars in global warming is 46% by producing toxic gases.
To tackle with this predicament, the government should launch a publicity campaign in media and in schools about the possible risks associated with the use of cars because this trend is increasing day by day due to lack of awareness among people about the threats. Furthermore, awareness campaign could shed more light on this issue and educate people that due to global warming our environment is in jeopardy, thus use of cars in a reckless manner could harm the climate. For example, a similar initiative was taken in Japan in 2017 resulted in a 60% decrease in the contribution of Japan in polluting the environment all over the world.
To conclude, global warming is the major issue that arises with the high-level use of automotive, However, this problem could be addressed by educating people about the threats to mankind due to pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 429, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a reckless manner" with adverb for "reckless"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...onment is in jeopardy, thus use of cars in a reckless manner could harm the climate. For example, a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, so, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95751633987 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68657862884 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509803921569 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0090807912 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.7 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207701199917 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852072406105 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534083687452 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133347723926 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639147527527 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.