Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today.
Nowadays, our world is undergoing a wide range of threats because of climatic changes including some human activities. Though modern technology is conducting huge researches to counter these issues, I think that a broader human movement and change in our habits are also necessary. My next sentences will explore the reasons What I choose.
First and foremost, a closer look at the technology shows that we are profoundly reliable on this to improve the environment of earth. For example, green buildings are replacing the conventional infrastructures to reduce heat island effect, over-temperature in urban areas. Moreover, renewable energy and recycling of used materials have superseded the use of coal, oil, and gases. As a result, the depletion of natural resources is being lowered. Recently, the industries which produce toxic chemicals and are caused by acid rain have been banned almost. Also, scientists and researchers have focused on marine lives to reduce overfishing and balance the marine eco-system.
However, there are many issues which are needed to be considered. For instance, the alarming number of plastics are causing erosion of lands, affecting the ocean whales, fishes, and other species. In spite of having modern scientific applications, the global temperature is increasing at least 2-3 degree. So, we can imagine that technology needs more improvements.
Overall, human activities are responsible for these unwanted issues. People are destroying forests and wildlife without having any plan. Likewise, we do not follow the legislation of using plastic materials and polythenes which are adversely
affecting us. Illegal fishing in the sea is the main factor for decreasing marine lives. Thus only modern technology is insufficient unless human consciousness arises. If the public and private sectors work together to enhance the awareness of
people about the environment, technology then can be more effective.
In conclusion, the aforesaid explanations show that there is no doubt modern technology is working to face today's unwanted happenings. Despite it, human carefulness is also a crucial point to overcome the problems. Otherwise, there will have adverse consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 90, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ain factor for decreasing marine lives. Thus only modern technology is insufficient ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, likewise, look, moreover, so, then, thus, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6328358209 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01054802666 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65671641791 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0810424851 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7727272727 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2272727273 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106704095014 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.026867596855 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379962199187 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561615179896 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479509788721 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.78 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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