You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank’s head office.
In your letter:
1. Explain why you are writing
2. Express concern about missing card
3. Ask them what they intend to do
Dear Sir or Madame,
I am writing to let you know that I have just received my letter that was supposed to include my new VISA card. Unfortunately, I found out that my new card was not enclosed when I opened my envelope. Plus, I also made a call to your hotline, but there was no answer.
I cannot do the acknowledgement the receipt of my card as your requirement since I have not received it yet. Plus, I am also worried about whether I have to pay for any purchases that I actually have not used it because somehow my card was delivered to a wrong person or got lost in its way.
In the meantime, please do lock my card so no one else can use it. In addition, would you please send me a new card as soon as possible in more secure method?
Thank you for your support. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Thao NGUYEN
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| 2018-05-11 | Priyankaa | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'worried'.
Suggestion: worried
...ve not received it yet. Plus, I am also worry about whether I have to pay for any pur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, look, so, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23353293413 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49028374716 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610778443114 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7240427511 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293594462095 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118980224189 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579296471952 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173305682787 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050135513663 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.