Nowadays, getting admitted into q university is quite a tedious job as most of the students are interested in graduation than ever before. Students who are not talented enough are finding it difficult to get admission, despite their financial status.
As per my understanding, the students with rich background need not suffer much as they have enough money for spending on their education and for their living. As they need not do any work, they find much time for concentrating on their academics. On the other hand, students from poor background have to work hard for admission into university, for which they need to work hard to earn money and they don’t get enough time to study as rich students.
Although rich students have enough money, they also face some difficulties. Some of the good universities only offer their full time programme to the students with good academic record rather than their financial status. They even sponsor to the students with meritorious record and only who are from poor background.
So I conclude that, getting an admission in universities is quite a difficult task for both the Rich and poor students. However, it is more difficult for poor students because of their financial problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...oney, they also face some difficulties. Some of the good universities only offer their full...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... the good universities only offer their full time programme to the students with good aca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09803921569 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74381973038 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.753064395 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168528245864 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817330198957 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555588360582 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122564481851 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637816226411 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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