the table below describe victim by age group offense categories in Venezuela 1999
The table given illustrates in terms of the number of Venezuelan of five age group who became a victim of various crime, namely murder, negligence, diligence, kidnapping, robbery, and blackmail in 1999.
Overall, robbery was the most popular offense across all the age group. Moreover, robbery ranked the highest point at 9680 total victims and was followed by kidnapping, blackmail, murder and negligence at 233, 223, 162 and 54 reported crimes, respectively.
The murder was the most common crimes reported from ages 25-44, about 72 and the least reported with 0-14 and 65+ at 14 and 13 reports, respectively. Negligence and kidnapping were highest with the 0-14 age group, at 39 and 110. Meanwhile, 65+ had the least victims at these crimes, around 9 and 3, respectively.
The robbery was the most significant category with the 15-24 and 25-44 age groups claiming 4558 transgressions. Blackmail affected 25-44 and 45-64-year-olds the most with 89 and 76 victims. By contrast, the 65+ group had the least number of the robbery at 220 reported crimes while the least victims of blackmail were just 4 victims in the 0-14 age group.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...obbery, and blackmail in 1999. Overall, robbery was the most popular offense acr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08021390374 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84420601395 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1504842738 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.555555556 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221156397971 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10407004508 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727193852503 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147857324961 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482382111373 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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