primary goal of education is to get a job
Author has stated - 'primary goal of education is to get a job' but does not provide any futher datails. Education has many forms such as formal school education, social education,perticular skilled based education and many more. confinding education to just get job will seriously undermine the whole purpose of getting education.
Education is have far more broader impact on persons lives then just getting job. Education help an individual to devlope an overall personality and make onself to be presentable in the society. Getting job is just one of many benefits of the Education. Learning about our culture, our past and history is also education but we do not learn this things to get job. Education enable us to learn many languages which help us to communicate with the world and thus provide more opportunities to get more educated.
primary goal of education is to connet individuals to the large pool of knowledge available in the world, it provides required tool with which one can harness that great knowledge in any field. For instance with the help of education one can learn how to use computer and by using compter one can learn about anything from schooling subjects to the extra-curriculum art.
Education brings large amount of Innovation in the world. invention of telephone by Graham Bell would not have been possible without some kind of education. Education makes world better place every second some kid in africa learned how to harness the solar energy and provided electicity to her villege. It bacame possible because of education.
Saying that primary goal of education is to get job will be very narrow thinking towards the education. Education provides much more than that to society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , perticular
...ormal school education, social education,perticular skilled based education and many more. ...
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Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Confinding
... skilled based education and many more. confinding education to just get job will seriousl...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he whole purpose of getting education. Education is have far more broader impac...
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Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...f getting education. Education is have far more broader impact on persons live...
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Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'broader' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: broader
... education. Education is have far more broader impact on persons lives then just getti...
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Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
... lives then just getting job. Education help an individual to devlope an overall per...
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Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Education) must be used with a third-person verb: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
... lives then just getting job. Education help an individual to devlope an overall per...
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Line 2, column 299, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Learning about our culture, our past and history is also education but we do not ...
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Line 2, column 347, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...y is also education but we do not learn this things to get job. Education enable us ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re opportunities to get more educated. primary goal of education is to connet i...
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Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Primary
...portunities to get more educated. primary goal of education is to connet individu...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...large pool of knowledge available in the world, it provides required tool with wh...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... subjects to the extra-curriculum art. Education brings large amount of Innovat...
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Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Invention
...arge amount of Innovation in the world. invention of telephone by Graham Bell would not h...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... bacame possible because of education. Saying that primary goal of education is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, so, then, thus, as for, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 283.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.074204947 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79824809875 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551236749117 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.636362122 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.460907284922 0.243740707755 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170371046992 0.0831039109588 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151950272178 0.0758088955206 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288804189644 0.150359130593 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168558698115 0.0667264976115 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.