fast food
Nowadays, people can find a fast food restaurant easily and more people eat it around the world. The
popularity of fast food taught by some people as a positive thing, but some others did not agree with it.
In my personal opinion, the increasing popularity of fast food gave more disadvantage to people.
Firstly, the mass-produced food sometime is un healthy. The nutrition in junk food is high on
carbohydrate and low in fiber, as in example, a burger which can be found in many fast food chain
restaurants contain high carbo from the bread and meat and only consist of few pickles as the fiber.
Moreover, as an easily serve food and can be stored in a long time, this kind of meal consist some
preservation which is harmful for human body.
Moreover, the increasing consumption of fast food also change the way of people interact each other in
their meal time. Before, people usually preparing food with their families and having deep conversation
or sharing stories in the dinnertime, but by having fast food this habit was change. Now, more people
prefer a quick and easy meal as their food and sometime take out their meal without having a proper
interaction with others. This situation makes them less socializing and can gave some disadvantage in
life such us misunderstanding and having lower tolerance rate.
To conclude, the growing popularity of fast food in my thought is giving more disadvantage side. Since
this kind of meal is consisting of some unneeded nutrition and also the habit of eating a quick meal
make people less communicate each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...me others did not agree with it. In my personal opinion, the increasing popularity of fast food...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('easily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('serve') instead of another adjective.
...few pickles as the fiber. Moreover, as an easily serve food and can be stored in a long time, ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ation which is harmful for human body. Moreover, the increasing consumption of fast foo...
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Line 16, column 19, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...dvantage side. Since this kind of meal is consisting of some unneeded nutrition and also the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94402985075 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67991246703 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529850746269 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6056797579 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.416666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425922287897 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196149094485 0.084324248473 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117377701683 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152568930419 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130994659104 0.056905535591 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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