Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older, while others think they should stay at home with the family.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A considerable number of people assert that teenagers should leave their house after a determined age to learn life skills. Others, on the other hand, the adamant opponents of the aforementioned view claiming that living with their family is more trustworthy. As far as I am concerned, the merits and drawbacks of both views must be pondered upon before advocating one.
On the one hand, the major benefit of staying home is particularly safe and secured. Without any potential problems, they can live a constant life throughout their existence. However, it has a certain negative impact on their career, which is a lack of exposure to global society. For instance, if a young man residing under their parents for a definite period, then it might be difficult for him to survive in this competitive world. Hence, they are incapable of competing with their counterparts and become successful.
On the other hand, there is a possibility where a teenager might struggle to adopt stay-alone situations. Initially, the learning phase will be critical and quite complex for them. Yet, there are certain advantages which help overcome the before-mentioned circumstance are, leaving home will help young one to learn survival techniques. For example, in foreign countries, adults after completing their graduations moved out of their parents, find a new occupation and have their own house. Therefore, this makes them learn about life skills and become confident enough to face the world.
All in all, I am of the adamant view that the latter holds merit. I take this view on account in a fit of the fact that despite some disadvantages raised, the merits galore inherent to leaving home after certain age far outweigh the aforementioned flaws.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16197183099 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87462856505 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612676056338 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1385412694 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172875107598 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551239379681 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370582498517 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101574519428 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198094270038 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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