Globalisation is the key factor to improve business and cultural contact between different nations of the world. This also means more and more people around the world are being similar. However, this situation results in both advantages and disadvantages which I will discuss further.
First and foremost, there are many advantages associated with globalisation. One of the most important contribution is that it provides employment to millions of people. Multinational companies are opening up their business in different parts, which paves way for most of the unemployed people. Secondly, there is a more efficient trade of goods within the nations that helps in improvising the economies of developing nations. Moreover, people have more opportunities to travel and get to know about different cultures.
Contrast to the advantages, there are some disadvantages linked to this. One of those is people with different attitudes, varied cultural backgrounds live together in the foreign countries, due to which there is a chance for them to follow other country traditions, forgetting their own food and surprisingly, their mother tongue too.
To conclude, despite the demerits linked to globalisation, there are many advantages associated with it. I agree that trade with the foreign countries yield more positive results compared to negative ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59708737864 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03314163158 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597087378641 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.648969385 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0833333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148314342612 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490124914893 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392129801567 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873013466342 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305484258806 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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