Write a letter to your company’s director recommending a group in your local community that deserves help.
In your letter, you should tell:
– why you have chosen that group
– how your company can help the group
– how your company will benefit in return.
Dear Sir,
My name is Valli, and I have been working for your concern as a senior executive officer for the past seven years. I am writing to bring your attention to the economically deprived people in my locality.
To make a long story short, for our product campaign, this year I choose the residents who are impoverished and destitute. Mainly, those people are vast in the majority and are struggling to fulfil their livelihoods. So they can benefit us in both marketing and charity.
Furthermore, every year we squander our money on advertisements to promote our products. But, this year I recommend it to be spent on these groups where we can educate them and help to fix their financial stability. In addition to that, we choose some children and help them profoundly for their education.
Consequently, as they are the major inhabitants, we act as a medium to uplift their lives. As a result, we get a good reputation and free promotions which help our company to retain its position in the global economy.
I hope you consider my aforementioned concerns.
Yours sincerely,
Valli
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9623655914 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93332170559 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3499742401 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9166666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 4.34317383033 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171923348956 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607960068875 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598068942382 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694233604902 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040494221992 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.